gfralin
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Re:Article for critique - 06/29/2007
Thanks Word Tickler. I've almost completed these edits. Your specifics have reminded me of some of the rules of Technical Writing I learned in college. Written communication is a subject I've generally been somewhat proficient in, with the exception of remembering rules of punctuation, but I got lazy here and didn't even realize it. I'm glad for this though, because it shows exactly what my article is communicating.
I've often been advised not to overuse puntuation such as comma's. Therefore, I have employed several of your suggestions while other's I have chosen to break up the sentence. Hopefully this also gives a variation in sentence length and structure.
I will finish this after a bit and repost it here, but I believe it is close to being ready for copy. One last proof read never hurts, so I will go through it and if you would do the same, or whomever wishes to do that, I will be grateful.
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