helene
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Re:Help needed with poem - 08/05/2006
I like it. I really like the way the words flow so well together. It does make me wonder what causes so much anguish and pain - but at the same time, it's easy to see that the point of the poem is more based more on unconditional trust than the cause of pain. It's a gift from the heart, one that can't be bought. That's what I like about the poem: you can learn your own lesson and form your own conclusion. Overall, well written.
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