gfralin
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Re:Dust - 09/26/2006
Thanks A.J. I'm pretty much looking for general critique on the piece. I've edited and edited, but you know how that goes. Extra eyes are often needed to make sure I didn't leave a word spelled wrong, unknowingly commit a writing no no, forget to finish a sentence or repeat something not necessary. General stuff.
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