ameliajane81
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Re:Dust - 09/23/2006
Hey,
If you're after a review/advice for this piece, I'd be more than happy to provide one/some. Just let me know what you're after. Do you want general stuff about storyline, or are you after more specific feedback about grammar and expression?
If you have already stipulated what you want, I apologise! I have that blindness where something is right in front of your nose but you can't see it 
AJ
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