Robert the Bard
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Re:Poem for feedback - 08/31/2006
I like it, and I get the flow. Water isn't a constant. It ebbs and flows according to whatever may be in it's path. While I'm not sure this is intended in the work, I'm left with the impression of water both giving life, and bringing about destruction. As I said though, I'm not sure where I get this, or if it's even intended. Overall, I like it, and it makes one think. Good work.
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