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Poem for feedback - 08/31/2006 Submergence
or
Night Collide

Discard the day
water still rushes
in the dead of night
listen
the faucet is left on again
uninhibited floods saturating
flattening plush carpet
the dreamer is awake somewhere
a puddle of fancied sensation
colorless in the dark
tempest in motion
stretching toward evolution
veiled eye
shallow breath
deluge does not hesitate
cannot decelerate
or stay
or stop
its creep under doorways
licking and sliding
up the pressed hem of closet dresses
waiting wear
waiting
ripples of slumber rise and fall
echoing into warping walls
submissive
submerged


Jennifer
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