Robert the Bard
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Re:I need help on my assignment... - 08/17/2006
I found it interesting, and compelling. I hesitate to critique the grammar, as I don't know if English is your primary language, but there are places where it seemed to be a bit wordy. I'll leave the professional criticisms to the professionals, however. All in all, I do like the article.
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