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Re:a hidden gift - 08/16/2006
poetiks wrote:
I believe we all have a true talent
Underlying our fronts and disguises,
Whether we choose to accept it
Is our own demise,
Some are blinded by ignorance
And others will take it and fly,
Im unable to awnser why this is
Only knowing its an awsome gift,
Ranging from notes and riff,
To mechanics and rhythm,
Whatever it is stay focused
Don’t turn this into a phycological prison.
By Poetiks
This first run through I've only addressed grammatical/spelling changes. It should look like this
I believe we all have a true talent
Underlying our fronts and disguises,
Whether we choose to accept it
Is our own demise,
Some are blinded by ignorance
And others will take it and fly,
I'm unable to awnser why this is
Only knowing its an awesome gift,
Ranging from notes and riff,
To mechanics and rhythm,
Whatever it is stay focused
Don’t turn this into a psychological prison.
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